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Post by Boxer on Feb 24, 2012 20:29:49 GMT -5
((this is basically RawBones point of veiw when he first met Yellow...srry the first chapter is so short...))
RawBones
My life was never easy I was a loner wolf never really had a place to go until the day I met her. It was a crisp new day I had wandered into some territory looking for any signs of life, well guess my luck there were none what so ever of life in the area. To quiz myself that no one was in the area I got up onto a tall boulder and howled long and strong. After my howl I shook out my pelt that had some twigs in it from my earlier encounter with an angry hungry wolf. I stood tall while I looked out at the horizon, I howled once more singing a song to all life around me. As I stopped howling I gazed at the birds who started filling the area I smiled at the sight. But out of the corner of my eye I spotted a wolf grey and yellow to be exact. I spun around to get a closer look, my motto was: No pack No mate makes a Wolf stronger! But that motto slowly drifted away as I looked at the beauty in front of me, I smiled to her. The she wolf went red in the cheeks, which made me so excited that I jumped down from the boulder to come face to face with her.
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Post by Everest on Feb 25, 2012 15:14:31 GMT -5
((As much as I want Yellow and Midnight to be forever and forever, I love this! Keep up the good work! Add a few commas here and there, maybe start a new paragraph after the first sentence, edit a few sentences for clarity, and you're off to a good start!))
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Post by Boxer on Feb 25, 2012 19:53:09 GMT -5
((thx i am going to put up chapter 2 soon!))
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Post by Yonk on Feb 25, 2012 21:41:44 GMT -5
((well get to it man,what thwee flip are you wating for?!?))
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Post by Boxer on Feb 25, 2012 21:48:05 GMT -5
(k here it is)
Chapter 2
“Hello” was all I could squeak out as I swam in her yellow eyes I sat down looking at her. She looked at me “H-h-hello” she stammered out at first I though she was afraid of me. “Yellow!” I heard a male wolf shout which made me stand taller “Yellow I-” he started looking at the female he then turned to me he growled “who are you?” he asked crouching down ears flatting down onto his head, barring his fangs, I rolled my eyes mentally in my mind by how pathetic he was being but on the outside I was calm and cool I hoped…“I am RawBones” I said answering his question “and you would be?” I asked him because I was in no rush to leave. “I’m Frost!” a little pup stood next to the male whom I had never noticed but the pup showed me it’s sun marking on his bottom. The male pushes Frost behind him sharply “never show that mark again to complete strangers!” the male barked sharply at Frost then he turned back to me “I’m MidnightStorm. I heard about these clans and such and was curious about them. Is this a clan territory?” he asked me “well you have asked the wrong wolf” I replied “oh? And why is that?” Storm asked I was really getting irritated with him and his darn questions! “well I travel around areas I’m a loner wolf…” I replied
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Feb 26, 2012 7:31:53 GMT -5
((Nice work ^^))
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Post by Boxer on Feb 26, 2012 15:34:15 GMT -5
((thx!  )) |
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Post by Evr on Feb 27, 2012 20:18:31 GMT -5
(LOL Frost used to be such an idiotXD)
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Post by Boxer on Feb 27, 2012 20:28:35 GMT -5
((XD))
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Post by Evr on Feb 27, 2012 21:06:36 GMT -5
(Continue!)
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Post by Boxer on Feb 28, 2012 15:05:03 GMT -5
((  )) |
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Post by Boxer on Apr 9, 2012 16:22:27 GMT -5
“Ah. I see. It's just that your name sounds like a clan wolf's does” he said “I assure you I am in no clan I travel with freedom.” I said straightening out my spine from irritation “ok how did you get those creepy marks” Frost asked Can’t these wolves ever stop putting their snout in other wolves business!? I looked at my markings bad memories came crashing back worst than an angry bee. “old wounds..” I lied to them hopping they would move on with the subject “Oh. Really? It doesn't look like wounds.” Out of the corner of his mouth, he whispered, "Thank you for that, but let me handle this." Storm whispered to Frost. I eyed Storm carefully I was not about to tell him about my terribly past… Storm put on a fake smile though I did not smile back theses wolves were too suspicious. I stood there staring at Storm I saw Frost stare coldly at me.
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 9, 2012 16:32:36 GMT -5
((Cool!))
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Post by Boxer on Apr 9, 2012 16:35:16 GMT -5
(( X3 ))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 9, 2012 16:38:13 GMT -5
((i got a new mouse!))
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Post by Boxer on Apr 9, 2012 16:39:56 GMT -5
((YaY!! wait..which kind of mouse???))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 9, 2012 16:43:39 GMT -5
((Computer mouse!))
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Post by Boxer on Apr 9, 2012 16:44:22 GMT -5
((yay!! computer mouse!!YAY!!! X3 ))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 9, 2012 16:45:41 GMT -5
((Yay!))
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Post by Evr on Apr 9, 2012 17:41:00 GMT -5
(Nice chaptere C:)
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--Pokesona
Pokesona evo 
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