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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Feb 21, 2012 14:10:10 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Her Death.
Blood. I saw the thin crimson liquid fly onto tne walls. A terrified and painful scream sounded. I saw everything from the shadows. My eyes widened, I jumped out, onto a wolf's back, clawing and biting it. The wolf floored me and walked of. I felt claws rake against me belly, and I yelled. I dragged myself over to the body, stained with blood. The blood oozed out, a puddle of it forming below the body. I pulled myself into tne pool of blood, trying to wake tne wolf up. Tears brimmed in my eyes, I choked back my tears. "Angel...? Angel, please speak to me!" I whinned. Angel had been my mate, and she was pregnant. They killed the pups and her. Everything I had was gone now. Angel coughed, a little bit of life still in her. I looked at her sadly. "Angel... I'm sorry, I-I wasn't there to protect you and the coming-litter..." Angel looked at me with half-closed eyes. She tried to get three words out. I finished te sentence for her. "I love you too..." We both shared a kiss, our very last kiss. I felt a withdrawl of breath from Angel as her eyes glazed over, and her head fell to the ground. "No... N-No... NO! ANGEL!" I cried. I lost my mate, I lost her forever...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Feb 23, 2012 16:49:42 GMT -5
Chapter 2: The confrence
I heard a loud chorus of howls. I stood up, my eyes slightly red from crying. I felt another presence, I quickly whipped around, standing in front of Angel's dead body. I growled, but I saw it was my ex-mate, Lola. She walked in a circled me. "Cyrus, your mate and your pups are dead. I'm so sorry..." I said nothing. She took a step towards me, pinning me to the wall, and kissing me. I widened my eyes, pushing her away. "Lola, I-I think you should go..." I whispered, laying down, covering my face. A silver veil went over me, fading away. Lola got closer. I glowed, and then, everything went black. When I woke up, I saw a dead she-wolf body. I regognized her as Lola. I stood up. "Crap..." I whispered. I turned around, and ran out. I ran all the way to a cave, with a circle drawn in front of it. I lay in the middle of it, and a veil made me invisable. Black lines appeared all over my body. I opened my eyes, they where a beep blue. A wolf appeared in front of me. The wof had battleclaws, and her fur was titned red. "Cyrus, how nice to see you again. I understand Angel has been killed." I said nothing, looking at her. "Can... Can you bring her back...?" The wolf, known as Munja, shook her head sadly, her back revealed some wings, black with red spikes sticking out of them. I stood up. "Why not?!" He growled sadly. The ground shook, as a silver veil surrouded him, becomig invisable. I lay down, Munja growled, a shadow veil surrounding her. I blacked out, as a white light exploded from me, penatrating Munja's barrier...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Feb 25, 2012 16:40:45 GMT -5
Chapter 3: A new arrival
I woke up slwoly, seeing Munja's body. Het body was limp, and a large cut lay down her soft underbelly. I gasped, and I slowly started to back away. I bumped into something, and there where more wolf gods and godesses. I saw Slash, Dusk, Light, The ghost of Munja, and more. I guped, knowing I was in deep trobule, I was extreeeemly aware of it. "Shit..." I whispered to myself. I felt a tightening pain in my chest, I clutched my throat. I was quickly losing air. I saw one of the gods with thier paws outstretched, and tightened into a fist. He was choking me with his power. I collapsed, curling into a ball, cluthcing my throat still. The veil appeared quickly, blasting the gods back. The god had released his grip, snarling at me. "You think yourself lucky. You should be dead for what you done to Munja!" Other gods howled and barked in agreement with him. I stood up, a mark all around my neck from where I was choked. I waved my tail in fustration of what I was hearing! "Shut up! As if you do anything to help us!" I snapped back at him, my ears bent back, my claws unsheathing. The gods all growled and dissapeared. I slowly slauntered of, futher away from the camp. I felt sadness and anger pulling me down, like I was being pulled down by heavy weights. I forced myself on though. I wasn't one to give up to easily. I felt my head hurting, a loud buzzing sound started to occur in my ears. I clutched my ears and screamed in pain. White lights danced in my vision. This was something else. I felt differant now, but the pain, and buzzing got worse. Blood slowly came from my mouth and nose. I shook greatly. I was being killed. I coughed, blood spluttering out, and landing on the ground. I looked at it. My pupils had gone into slits. I heard a snap, and I blacked out, falling to the ground. A star apeared on my forehead, as the blood still came from my nose. A trickle of blood came out from my right ear, the sound had almost killed me. I was in a nightmare, a world of darkness. ed eyes glared out from dark corners, all glaring at me. I saw a pair of gold eyes. Fire surrounded me, as it got closer. It taunted me, like I was it's playtoy. The fire circled me, and enclosed around my fur. I was being burned alive. I then woke up, my eyes snapping right open. They where bloodshot, and my head was in a pool of blood. I quickly looked about, and saw a wolf right in my face. "Hello!" She chirpped happily.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Feb 26, 2012 14:14:40 GMT -5
Chapter 4: Rubix!
I was stunned, as this she-wolf popped out of nowhere. She laughed, pulling me to my feet. "Hiya! I'm Rubix! And you are?" She questioned. I said my name simply, she steppd forwards, but I stepped backwards. I was quite hesitant of this wolf. I did not know her scent, and she wasn't from my pack. Her eyes flashed, now showing worry and guilt. "Are you okay Cyrus?" I just nodded. She sighed and sat down. "I heard you screaming so I rushed over. I then saw you in a pool of blood. I don't know what happened, but it didn't sound good Cyrus..." Rubix whispered. I thought things where gonna calm, but it didn't. A pack of wolves jumped out, snarling at me. I just sighed, but Rubix growled, warning them to back off. I then decided to hold my ground. I took a place beside Rubix, and we both snarled. "Bust a move!" I snapped, Rubix obviously found it funny. I also chuckled at those words. But the wolves all crouched, and the veil went around me again. I crouched. "Rubix, quick, run." Rubix did so, running to a tree and climbing up it. The wolves pounced, as I glowed white. Then everything went black. I heard a voice, but I didn't wake. I wasn't sure if I was dead or not. I then went back into my nightmare. The golden eyes came back, and they narrowed. I had all eyes on me, red like Angel's blood. I growled. I felt my anger rise, as I steppee forwards. A huge snarl rose up my throat, my tail waved in fury. A wolf jumped out at me, and I darted forwards, and bit it's paw. It snarled and bit my ear, tugging. I yowled, as I pulled away, my ear ripping. I flew backwards, so did my opponent. Suddenly, I snapped out of me dream. I woke up slowly, seeing a body beside me. It was Rubix. There was a cut on her neck, and it was bleeding. Tears welled in my eyes as they fell. They crashed to the ground silently as I howled sadly.
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Mar 1, 2012 14:57:15 GMT -5
Chapter 5: What?! She's alive?!
A few months had passed, and I was sitting on a rock. I had killed two wolves, and lost around 6. I sighed sadly. But then I froze, my fur stood on end, as a wolf walked in. It was just a friend, Smudge. He sighed. "Cyrus, your to depressed. You need to lighten up a bit!" I said nothing. He sighed impatiantly, and he jumped down and walked off. I just watched Smudge walk of. He paused, and then he looked at me. "Well, I tried." Smudge then disappeared into the forest. My ears bent back, I lay down, closing my eyes. I sighed, falling into a light slumber. I was out for hours, and I felt another wolf near. I growled, opening my eyes, and looking. My eyes widened, seeing who the wolf actually was. "R-R-Rubix...?" I whinned. The wolf smiled. "Hey Cye." She said. I leaped to my feet, going to her height. I leaned in, gently kissing her. Rubix kissed me back, and we embraced together. I broke the kiss, putting my face into her shoulder. "I love you Rubix..." I whispered, then I decided to ask. "Rubix, I have a question. W-will you be my mate?" She blushed. "Y-Yes!!!" She cried, we kissed again. This was the happiest day of my life!
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Mar 10, 2012 15:34:18 GMT -5
Chapter 6: Wha?! I-It can't... I'm going to kill them...
Since I had asked Rubix to be my mate, we spent everyday together. We whispered to each other, shared meals, and went to the lake for swims. But the odd thing was, we had never taken it to the next level. I decided to not think about it, and I nudged Rubix. "Hey, Rubs. Guess what." I whispered. She smiled. "What?" She whispered back. "I see you..." I smiled. We kissed eachother, and I looked back out the the forest. I pressed closer to Rubix, and we both topelled over. I landed on her belly. We both blushed, a strange sensation had overcome me for some reason. I didn't know how to explain it. "Uh, Rubix, a-are we-" Rubix nodded shyly, and I just blushed harder. Intinct made me move up and down. It then got mature(XD). ---FEW HOURS LATER--- I woke up besdie Rubix, on my back, she was on her back too, her legs spread out. I yanwed, and decided to catch some food. I ran out, and stalked a gerd of deer. I jumped onto a ledge, and jumped onto one's back. It kicked ad flew about! I tried to hang on, but it kicked me in the belly. I flew off, and I landed in front of the deer, who where running. They trampled over me, and one booted my head. I was knocked out cold. When I woke up, I saw blood all over the path, a trail of blood, it seemed like some creature had been attacked and dragged of. I then saw some wolf look at me worriedly. I sniffed the air, knowing it was Rubix. She had tears streaming down her cheeks. She was shaking, and there was blood all on her hips. She dragged me to the cave, and hid in the darkness. "C-C-Cye... I..." I listened to what she had said, and my eyes widened. My teeth barred, and I growled. I turned towards the exit, smelling another wolf. It was fresh. Rubix had been forced to mate with another wolf. I snarled.
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 1, 2012 6:57:40 GMT -5
Chapter 7: A battle of vengeance
I paced in the cave, my tail bristling like crazy? How dare someone rape my mate!!! I then punched the wall, making a crack on it. Rubix became very worried about this. "Cye! Just stop this, your scaring me!" I looked at Rubix as my expression softened gently. "I'm sorry Rubs. I'm just really angry and upset. What did the wolf look like?" Rubix explained to me, that he had grey fur, with a white muzzle. He had a scar down his eye, and he had a big bushy tail. "What?! Rubs, you where raped by my dad!" Rubix's eyes widened, and she cleaned herself. I got up and ran of, after my dad. As my paws pounded on the ground, my eyes narrowed, and they turned red. I jumped into the camp, and glared at dad. "Dad. How dare you rape my mate!" I roared at him. Dad just laughed. "She dosn't deserve you Cyrus. She needs a mate who isn't stupid like you!" "Dad, I don't care what you say. I need to stay with her, she's pregnant with my pups." Dad's eyes widened. "You MATED with her?!" Dad jumped at me, and I bit his paw. "I was here for a fight anyway!" Markings appeared on my body, I muttered some words. "Øöæïóööë žěķēš· džțūřŕăķėž!" Dad jumped again, and bit on my back, and I rolled on my back, squashing him. Dad put his paws on my neck, and I swatted them away. We got up, panting. I ran at Dad, and he bit on my face, his teeth going into my eye. I screamed, as I kicked him where it hurts. Dad yowled, and I went in for the kill. Dad quickly reacted, and he pinned me to the ground. Dad brought up his paw, and sliced my neck. My eyes went wide, as I saw my life crashing down. I saw my dad run of. Rubix was out to find me, as she had just given birth, to Storm, Sapphire, Bolt and Dash. She saw me, dying. Rubix screamed, and fell to her knees. "Cye!! No!" I managed to say something. "R-Rubs... I'm sorry... Please, t-take care of them well..." I then died, Rubix held me close, saying her respects to herself...
THE END... Or IS it?
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Post by Yonk on Apr 1, 2012 11:50:07 GMT -5
((Great jo on the stor so far!! Just posting so I can see your writings. >: ( ))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 1, 2012 11:52:19 GMT -5
((Thanks, I'll need to think more on this. I'm making a new one too ^^))
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Post by Yonk on Apr 1, 2012 11:57:50 GMT -5
((*Sigh* Z,please PM me yoour last chapter? Stupid coomputer of mine. >: ( ))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 1, 2012 12:12:10 GMT -5
((I'm not on a computer right now, sorry.))
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Post by Yonk on Apr 1, 2012 14:03:44 GMT -5
((Wait,My computer let me read it!! *Dies* WHAT KIND OF DAD RAPES HIS DAUGHTER-IN-LAW AND THAN KILLS HIS SON?!?!))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 1, 2012 15:08:11 GMT -5
((I dunno! Blame my mind!))
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 6, 2012 17:37:29 GMT -5
Guys, do you think I should develop this story more, and make it a full story? I would like opinions, so I'm adding a poll!
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Post by Yonk on Apr 6, 2012 17:52:43 GMT -5
Yus,Make it keep goinnnnng!
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 6, 2012 17:56:39 GMT -5
I'm gonna keep the vote open until the start of may ^^
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 25, 2012 15:38:20 GMT -5
Okay, I will make this thread into an actual story!! I'll make a cover for it too, and then I'll see what you think of it ^^ Also, I think I would like an idea of how much longer my chapters would need to be, so if you have an idea, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PM me. Yes, the caps where needed Sorry, so yes. Any ideas/suggestions to make the story more shocking/exciting/*insert word here* then tell me, please. Also, another point to make. I'll be doing this on PokeFarm too. So keep an eye out for a PF thread called Blood In My Eyes! And, I think one more for you guys. Trust me, this won't take much longer. I also need an idea of how to make the character designs, kay? I will ask you to PM me ideas for this again. Thanks for reading my rant of sorts ^^
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