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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 1, 2012 12:09:44 GMT -5
Prolouge
A blinding light... I heard some voices of other wolves. I tried to hear the conversation. W-what...? Ah! L-lemme go!
I mewled, as I felt the wind, and I hit a hard surface. I wailed in pain, landing on the cold ground.
"Little mutt..." I heard a deep voice, it was Dad. It sounded like he didn't like me at all. He put a paw on my back, and pressed down, on my fragile bone. I squeeled.
"Marcus! S-stop hurting her now! She did nothing." A high-pitched voice wailed. I guessed it was Mum, defending me. I felt the weight go, and I mewled in relief. The weight came back, and I cried again. Mum cried in anger, as she bit Dad.
I felt a metal object hit my head. "My medalion!" Mum barked, then she picked me up. "Medalion is her name, and YOU, Marcus, will not harm her." I landed on the ground, and I heard Mum yelp in pain. I then felt a sharp pain.
A liquid trickled down my back, I cried and whimpered. Wh-what's going on?! Ahh! S-Stop it Dad!! Wah! I then felt my eyes slowly close, as my body fell limp. "No..."
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 2, 2012 18:01:05 GMT -5
Chapter 1: Daddy...?
I still remember the horrors of that day... I still cry to myself. Mum's gone, with Tooth and Star, my brother and sister. I'm left alone with my dad... The hatred he causes me is un-bearable, I almost cry myself to sleep every hour or so. Why me? Why is it me that gets the toll?
Dad stalks in, and he bites down on my neck, clamping down harder, in an attempt to kill me. "M-MUM!!" I cried, but I remembered I have no mother now, because she was gone. Dad then threw me around, and at a wall, where I hit my leg on it, squashing fowards and snapping it.
I squeeled as I hit the ground, and I blacked out.
I heard my dad laugh, before my vision faded out, and I heard nothing. I thought myself I was dead, like Dad did. When I woke, I didn't move, just incase something happened. But it was a bad idea, because I felt myself being dragged away.
Dad tugged and pulled, as I held in my screams of pain. Tears fell down my cheeks, as I let out a cry for help. "No one's here to help you Medalion. No one. Haha..."
I suddenly roared out. "GET OF DAD! I HATE YOU SO MUCH! I DON'T DESERVE THIS, YOU DO!"
My Dad looked hurt. I didn't give him any sympathy. He reached a paw out, and I snapped at it. I then ran. I ran far, then I thought. What happened to make you this way? ...Daddy...
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Post by Evr on Apr 2, 2012 18:06:23 GMT -5
Sorry Z but i really doint like it;...
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 2, 2012 18:10:01 GMT -5
hey, its fine. imwritting it on paper too, improving it slowly
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Post by gL_IT&cH*eD $R_Ed on Apr 2, 2012 20:39:24 GMT -5
I like it. Seems like a good story so far.
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 3, 2012 8:33:44 GMT -5
Thanks Red
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Post by Yonk on Apr 6, 2012 21:49:09 GMT -5
its really.... Depressing. :/
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Post by Evr on Apr 6, 2012 21:50:49 GMT -5
Well i dont like it because i dont get it at all..I see what youre trying to go for but what did they even do thta makes him so angry?....
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 7, 2012 4:05:33 GMT -5
Evr, when Medalion was born, her dad saw the mark on ner leg. He was so fustrated he took it out on Medalion.
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Post by Evr on Apr 7, 2012 7:23:46 GMT -5
Oh,Okay thank you XD
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Post by ˛°•SilverxStorm•°˛ on Apr 7, 2012 8:55:31 GMT -5
No problem ^^
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